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[Kingdom-Hearts_2 1/2]

Patience

That is the key for you when making flash. It seems that you rushed alot of it, or at least, didn't take the time to make everything looks really good. Example: in your first scene it shows sora walking at 90 miles an hour at a really choppy rate. Try to space out the steps so that it looks more natural, as well as draw in between those frames as well, to make it more smooth. Also when just drawing a character, just take your time, and things will turn out much nicer.
-Duchednier

merit44 responds:

Yes, this was a rushed project as stated in the authors comments. I only had 4 days to work on this, so that is why you see what you see. I was experimenting with the style, as well, which it is probably why it wasn't as smooth as it could have been. I have some big plans for the next one. I want to capture some of the disney type movements that were present in the game itself. Look out for the next one. You won't be disappointed.

[Zelda Blues]

didnt i see this somewhere before?

oh yeah... it was decline. no offence but you should take their ideas but not their art. and then dump their ideas... but not all bad

Blaze responds:

Yeeah... I kinda used their models as guides.. or bases... Im gonna change them in later submissions. I just couldnt make anything that looked good. x_x sorry.

[_=-The Dream-=_]

WASTE OF TIME

nuff said

sammy-D responds:

aww poor diddums, sorry to be wasting your preciouse time! lol