Interesting..
Sometimes i check out random green stuff new to flash portal, this is neat.
My main issue with it though is that THOUGH you have a big story that you're making, you seem to lack the will to put the time into drawing each shot out. Put more work into each scene and this thing could be way better.
Wait, one other thing... is this supposed to be a comedy? The art, the whole narration part, and stuff like that kinda suggests it is, but the story doesn't SEEM to be one...idk..
anyways, yeah..keep workin at it :)
-Jordan Duchnycz