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Holy smokes!

That was crazy man! Excellent work!

I can smell movie of the moonntthh!!

You should hire a writer

Well the voice acting is pretty bad to start, but you should hire a writer to get some better dialogue going, which in turn might help out the voice acting too.

Other than that, keep working on it :) With more practice your animation and art will improve and it could turn into something big.

Also, you need wayyy more sfx everywhere

Oh man!

I love you guys!

yeah okay

Just a thought, you should spend more time on each episode rather than just pumping them out crazy fast. With better art and animation it could be a popular series.

Excellent work.

Being an animator of my own drama series, i can definitely appreciate the work that you put into this piece. Good luck on part 2, I'm looking forward to it.

RPGsrok responds:

You gotta do this sorta thing to really grasp what's involved. XD Good luck with your own efforts! And thanks for reviewing!

This...

This doesn't end...does it..

..well that was 20 minutes wasted :P

Hahaah

Short and sweet, was going to give it a 9 for being way too short, BUT its one of those things that if you continued it, it totally woulda dragged on and lost its humor.

Nice job son :)

boybogart responds:

That's true man. Glad you liked it. Cheers!

Oh i get it!

Curses! I've gone through 3 usernames now and it seems that they're all missing one BIG ingredient. The adjective!

Aro, Duchednier, JordanD...UGH! Back to the old drawing board!

I'm happy you showed me how to do it right! Thanks RedHarvest and possibly LazyMuffin too maybe!

LewToons responds:

you sandbaggin s.o.b, i actually never knew u used to be aro ( im gonna go look at all ur old shit!)

Oh man really?!

Really?! You made THIS?! Oh man...that's rich :P

I love it harry!

Hahaha

I don't know what's funnier, the movie itself or rpeet687's review :P

yeah that was pretty good :D Good cartoony animation style too, nice job!

MyKindOfFlash responds:

Thanks!

And I really tried with making the character more elastic and cartoony than I normally do. It's quite freeing and fun, I'll have you know!

Everything is Connected. 🙏💛✨

Jordan River @RiverJordan

Age 32, Male

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The Mystery School of Life

Canada

Joined on 6/14/05

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