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[inside influences]

This has a GREAT vibe to it! Well done!! :)

sacarious responds:

Oh thanks man!
Im glad you enjoyed it

[[OS] Following Orion]

Mellow

Hmmm, it's pretty mellow, it's got a general beat that's pretty consistent with itself. I found some parts were just plain or lacking a little extra finesse, (like a 2:01).

There was one melody in particular that sounded kinda wonky too, (the beeping melody around 3:06), i think just because the notes were sometimes everywhere.

Good show tho dude! Good to see some new stuff from ye ;)

ObsidianSnow responds:

Man, 2:01 gave me so much trouble. I must have spent a solid 30 minutes just trying to get that drop right. Couldn't get it quite right in the end, so I just let it ring for 2 beats... Mayhaps I'll go back and try it again, I'll see if I have time.

As for the stuff at 3:06... I built it all off the shiny new theory I've been learning. Everything fits into the chord structure, but I know what you mean. Probably mixed up a chord somewhere in there, but I was planning on cleaning that up tonight anyways (OMFG!? OS IS DOING EDITS!? OH GOD WHAT IS GOING ON). Good to know I'm not crazy.

Thanks for the review, JD! Keep in touch, bro.

--EDIT--
I made some changes to those sections, they sound a lot better now.

[Tetris On The Toilet]

*crazy applause*

Hahaaaaa, THE TOILET IS CALLING!

Evil-Dog responds:

You don't have much time then haha

[[OS] Basement in the Sky]

Interesting..

Its not too bad, my taste in Techno is more dance-ish, but yeah its pretty trippy :P Nice work

ObsidianSnow responds:

lol thanks, bud. I think this probably could have been quite a bit better if I hadn't been forced to use my crappy laptop speakers for the mastering, though - I was mostly just shooting in the dark to be honest. XD

Funny you mention dance, though, I was planning on tasting that next.

anyways, thanks for the comments!

[[OS] One Perfect Hour]

Beautiful!

As i told you just before you left google talk, the intro is TOTALLY World-map music for an RPG

Love it dude :D

ObsidianSnow responds:

haha, yeah, the oboe does seem to have that effect. I'll keep that in mind.

Thanks for the review, bud!

[[OS] Beyond The Snow]

Sexy crazy awesome XD

I downloaded it before i even listened to it :P

I tend to do that with your stuff, as you're like my official musician partner guy now :P

K actual review:

its incredibly emotional, I like how you not only make the music emotional, but you actually put YOURSELF into the song with your song description! I respect that in you man :)

Good stuff =D

ObsidianSnow responds:

lol, yeah...

Thanks for the review, Duchednier!

[{425} XenoxX]

How many people did you PM about this? :P

Its pretty sweet actually, i definitely enjoyed it :) I'll have to check out xenoxx now

Michael425 responds:

Just sent some PM's out to people that favorite'd me. I'm glad you like it. You will definitely enjoy XenoxX's music.

~{425}~

[[OS] Bloodstained Phoenix]

Stunning :D

I downloaded it when you submitted and then realized now "Hey! I didn't write a review yet!"

So..here's my epic review ;)

Im lovin the piano dude! I'm bad with reviewing stuff but yeah, it definetly has a feel to it like all of your music! You put your soul and emotion into your work rather than just spamming some crappy offbeat techno!

And that there was my epic review!

ObsidianSnow responds:

Yes! This review is of epic proportions, truely!

lol, thanks for your review. I appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, Duchednier.

[-:YRX:-ChaozPhantasy RMX]

Not bad

Yeah not bad, its still a little repetative like that other guy said below this post. But its still good.

There are alot of these out aren't there O.o have you heard MorganKing's ChaosPhantasy remix? its pretty good.

YouriX responds:

Thanks for the honest review. I'll try to make my songs to variet more :)
But i never heard of MorganKings or maybe i did but dont remember :)

[//A -*Demo Mix 1*-]

Turns me on ^_^

Heh, YAAAAY!

Argyros responds:

Good to know....since I have to sit beside you in exactly 14 hours.... ;)