So I forced my writer-friend Jasmin to read the whole Exile script so that i would have someone to bounce idea's off to help out with some of the plot holes... it pretty much resulted in a 6 hour long overhaul of the series where after about chapter... 7ish... the entire thing goes in a COMPLETELY different direction than originally planned.

The good: The story DOES flow alot better now, there's a bit of a slowdown in the middle now though, but whatever it does work well :)

The bad: Now I can't say that i wrote an original series :P I mean its not about the glory i'm totally cool with putting "Written by Me and my friend" on the credits, i just liked the thought that i could write my own series.. Good motivational booster ya kno?

whatever though, its not a huge deal in the end at all :) I'm happy with the new result!

Whats going to change?

WELL my friend Jasmin is ALSO doing a re-write of the series in a novel form. As in "better written dialogue" i may just go into the old Exile.fla's and replace the old dialogue with new. If i do that i won't be resubmitting the series though, just making them sound good for newcomers :) (Might touch up some arts too, but re-animating would take much too long)

anyways, I just felt like sharing that.. Not sure if anyone will actually care to read it but in case they do, there's that..

Ps. Went to see Basshunter live last night, was pretty sick!